Why Sillybandz shouldn’t be
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Most of our school has Sillybandz and most of our class thinks that they are a distraction but I think they are wrong!!!
Firstly Silly bandz are FUN because you trade with your friends. Silly bandz help you with your learning because it encourages you to think outside the square.
Secondly I feel that Sillybandz make students happy and EVERYBODY knows that a happy student is a good student. If students want to play with their Sillybandz I think that they should play with their Sillybandz at playtime.
So in CONCLUSION, naturally I feel that children SHOULD be allowed to bring Sillybandz to school.
JBy AlarnaJ
A good argument Alarna. I would like to share it with my class so that they get better at writing an argument if that is okay with you.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work, and thank you for sharing it with us.
Mrs H
Room 9
P.S Do you think teachers should reconsider having Sillybanz? Maybe you could think up some rules for having them at school.
so true from George in Room 9
ReplyDeletevery good argument Alarna!
ReplyDeleteVery well done:D
By Angela
sorry I do not agree.
ReplyDeleteBy Kahu
Very wonderful argument Alarna!
ReplyDeleteNice job:)
By Aiyah
wow what nice argument alarna i like it
ReplyDeletewow what a great argument alarna
ReplyDeleteBY Kyrah
what a awesome argument alarna
ReplyDeleteBY Kwaillen
awesome argument Alarna You rock.
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